Claudio, although you have written in a nice lot of detail, your analysis is mainly description of what you can see, rather than why those things are there. For example, instead of saying "THey have chosen to have him hanging on the wall" you COULD have said "The company have shown him hanging on the wall. This makes him look strange and mysterious and will make people wonder how he can climb walls and so they may be encouraged to come and see the film to find out." Try doing more of this next time.
Claudio, although you have written in a nice lot of detail, your analysis is mainly description of what you can see, rather than why those things are there. For example, instead of saying "THey have chosen to have him hanging on the wall" you COULD have said "The company have shown him hanging on the wall. This makes him look strange and mysterious and will make people wonder how he can climb walls and so they may be encouraged to come and see the film to find out." Try doing more of this next time.
ReplyDeleteANALYSIS = 2/10 = E