Claudio, although you have written in a nice lot of detail, your analysis is mainly description of what you can see, rather than why those things are there. For example, instead of saying "it also has The Legend Ends" you COULD say (for more marks) "The tag line is The legend Ends. This suggests to the audience that this film will be legendary which will make them want to see it. It also suggests it will include the end of the Batman story so it encourages people to see it who might have seen the previous Batman films." Try doing more of this next time.
Claudio, although you have written in a nice lot of detail, your analysis is mainly description of what you can see, rather than why those things are there. For example, instead of saying "it also has The Legend Ends" you COULD say (for more marks) "The tag line is The legend Ends. This suggests to the audience that this film will be legendary which will make them want to see it. It also suggests it will include the end of the Batman story so it encourages people to see it who might have seen the previous Batman films." Try doing more of this next time.
ReplyDeleteANALYSIS = 2/10 = E